try adding some music! it really improves viewer enjoyment and there is heaps to found at the newgrounds audio portal!
also make it longer, give it a loader and dont make it loop!
put these in mind for your next flash :P
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that. was. the. best. thing. i have
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omg... and that was a fur elise remix
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