try adding some music! it really improves viewer enjoyment and there is heaps to found at the newgrounds audio portal!
also make it longer, give it a loader and dont make it loop!
put these in mind for your next flash :P
"still choking on words"
this is an excellent peice and the start with the flute... sounded so much like morrowind lol
has anyone else noticed ? and btw i love morrowinds soundtrack
I ... LOVE... IT
10/10 from me
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